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Title: Together Forever


coolbinkygal - October 9, 2009 07:14 PM (GMT)
Name of Board: Together Forever
Link to Board: CLICKY?
Short description of Board:

Well, this site is based on a fictional town called 'Radcliff Heights'. It's a small town, located in between the big city, and the country. It's a real life, modern roleplay, and is basically for high school aged kids, AND adults.
(haha, short enough? xD)
Analysis Notes: Preferrably just an overall view of the site, and constructive criticism is welcomed.
Link to profile on the Board: .Sydney.

EDIT ; Ok, I feel kind of stupid, as I forgot to mention the canons aren't complete.... I'll be working on this, and as I feel no need for your to criticize my canons, just look at the others and forget that the canons aren't complete. '^^ Thanks!

umbreon - October 9, 2009 07:39 PM (GMT)


I'd just like you to know i have nothing against you no matter what i might say, so just to let you know. XD

Organization: I think the rules are very well done; however i'd like more information on whether you can create an 'ooc' account. i've had this question before, so it'd be nice if you could include that in the rules. pretty easy to find, very well organized. it'd be really nice if the category sections were larger; right now they look about the same as the boards. if you make the categories with bigger font it'd be easier to notice.

Appearance: this part looks fine. i really like the side bar banners, but the front page banner; could you add a little decor to it? it's your choice, of course, but it would seem more interesting that way. right now it looks a little plain. :sweat:

Layout: as i said before, keep the boards as they are or a smaller size and hopefully make the categories quite a ways bigger than they are, or else they're not as noticeable as they should be.

Staff: well, you're the only staff right now, and i don't know you, so there's nothing to say, except you've done a pretty good job.

General Feedback: it's a great site so far, keep working on it. canons seem almost complete... or at least half complete. LOL

coolbinkygal - October 9, 2009 08:01 PM (GMT)
Haha, thanks for your imput.

I added the thing about ooc accounts, and I'm going to edit the front banner.

And you're on the nose , the canons are half completed. xD

I'll get to the category thing once I figure out how to make it bigger... o.O

EDIT ; AND SHOOT! I wrote the name of the board wrong on the new banner. -eye twitch- For those who are reviewing, please ignore that stupid mistake. xD

CAINE AND COMPANY!? - October 16, 2009 07:20 PM (GMT)
Organization: The only issue with organization that I can see is linked directly into the layout, which I get into in the next section, but to just get it over with here: The boards need borders. Without them, the text looks intimidating and sloppy, like it's all been shoved into a space it was never meant to fit in. Borders would help that a lot. I'd personally suggest #363636 for the border color, if that helps any.

Appearance: While I enjoy the colors, I agree with Umbreon. Just a tad plain. I'd suggest adding in a boarder color that's a wee bit lighter than the board color, to set them apart from the background. Without that boarder there, it seems like there's just a bunch of crowded text, and honestly, I don't know where to look first. Also, the "of the month" images are a bit big. I'd suggest either 150x150 icons , or 100x100 icons. They just take up to much room as they are, and only serve to distract. Other than that, I can't say I can complain. Oh, and did I mention I love the banner?

Layout: I see no faults with coding, and overall, a pleasant look. The only thing that sticks out is that you background image has a border clash. Maybe it's just because my screen is wider though, but I'd recommend fixing that, if it bothers ya.

Staff: I don't know ya personally, no, lol. So what should I put here, besides that the admin has good taste in colors? :pink:

General Feedback: Overall, not a bad idea. I like the layout of this board, despite it's minor flaws, and it's gentle and pleasing to my eyes. Organization is fair, which, considering what a terrible organization fiend I am, is a big compliment. Good job, and good luck with you board!

coolbinkygal - October 17, 2009 10:03 PM (GMT)
Thanks for the feedback!

I changed the "of the month" pictures to make them smaller. And once I figure out how to make borders around the categories, I will change that too.

Anywho, thank you very much!

seanbear. - April 19, 2010 03:05 PM (GMT)
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