Title: Attack Of A Sue
Description: >.<
Brandy - August 11, 2008 01:35 AM (GMT)
Ok...so wow. I was on the forum where I RP a minute ago, and a bio was posted. Me, being the curious gal I am, clickied on her bio so I could read it. And wow....what a Sue.
It boggles my mind how anyone could write like this. First off, her name is one of those weird spellings....like DaPhnie or something. That alone made me roll my eyes.
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(Name removed) is tall she has Brown hair with blonde highlights her eyes are a deep blue like the ocean she has very fair Skin with semi visable freckles. She has a playful look .
Markings: Born with 4 differnt colored stars that represent different Abilities |
And btw, she spelled her own name wrong. That's the calibur of writing I see so far. And Born with 4 different colored stars on her? Wow. Just....Wow.
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| Personality: shes playful which makes her easier to get along with shes very kind and sweet , caring .. very friendly but shy she loves to sing and dance when no one is looking or atleast when she thinks no one is looking shes always been curious about..... everything Like when she was little she saw this scarey looking beast out side and she decided to explore long story short she ended up with a scare one the back of her head |
She's a wee bit perfect, no? Yeah.....
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Powers: using the Elemets
Abilities: Sing ppl to sleep
Weaknesses love |
........... <-- Enough said.
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| Backstory- Left alone to fend for her self at the age of 6 due to violent rage of beings who dispised her family (Name removed) Was the only one that could use any ability she was taken by Jaggers to be used as their own personal weapon .. they were the ones that took (Name removed)'s family away from her after finding out they were not able to do anything ..(Name removed) being the youngest of 7 Childeren was the only on spared her life With the Jaggers was good to say the least they treated her well always speaking nicely and being sweet so (Name removed) never saw what they were really capable of until the day she turned 16 when she watched the woman she called mother a family of 4 . (Name removed) was in such utter shock that she ran home and packed her things and left Running for over 7 months (Name removed) stoped in a town where she heard people talking about a man named James who was looking for his sister who had been missing for over 10 years the mans last name was the same as hers . Now (Name removed) is 17 and in search of where she may belong. |
Yeah. Now, reading that, tell me that doesn't SCREAM sue? Now, Tell me what I should tell the admin, I want to warn her of the Sue-y-ness of this nightmare of an RPer....And if you have any Sue horror stories, let's hear 'em!
Madame Everard - August 11, 2008 01:50 AM (GMT)
Is the board open application? If not, any admin with sense would reject this nonsense right away. Her "backstory" was hardly even coherent, so she clearly lacks both creativity and actual writing ability.
Lady Hikari - August 11, 2008 02:01 AM (GMT)
Ewwwwww. Just Ew. I'd wave Sue flags if you could.
Satire.and.Ice - August 11, 2008 02:47 AM (GMT)
Holy crap. o.O I don't know how anyone can even stand to sit at a computer and write that. I'd reject this app on the spot. The app itself was hardly even readable.
Greymalkin - August 11, 2008 03:59 AM (GMT)
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| ... watched the woman she called mother a family of 4. (Name removed) was in such utter shock ... |
huh?
I mean ... huh?
SpazzyMal - August 11, 2008 04:08 AM (GMT)
That history was so confusing I couldn't even get half way through it before my brain exploded.
It made a terrible mess to clean up, but it was still less a mess than that application.
Madame Everard - August 11, 2008 05:07 AM (GMT)
| QUOTE (Greymalkin @ Aug 11 2008, 03:59 AM) |
| QUOTE | | ... watched the woman she called mother a family of 4. (Name removed) was in such utter shock ... |
huh?
I mean ... huh?
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I think she meant to say "killed a family of four." That's my best guess, anyway. It's appropriately tragic.
xprincessgwenythx - August 11, 2008 05:31 AM (GMT)
I think...I threw up a little reading that. I mean come on!
wow. seriously? For serious?! Who would write something like that?
Please tell me she's only just started rping like a week ago and this is her
first character ever and first board and she's like 12.