Hey, maybe I can help. When I'm thinking up things my thoughts get scattered, so I can understand where you're coming from , and it helps to have someone to help you mold your main idea into something like a story. (I have a hard time doing that with my own ideas, but I'm pretty good at helping others)
Well, I'll give it a shot since no one else has, and I'm home sick from work, and bored, and looking to get my rping and writing back up to par, so..yeah hehe.
I've roleplayed on and off for about 7 years now. I done everything from Harvest moon, to kingdom hearts, to real world school rps, Harry potter boards all the way to more challenging victorian era rps.
I'd be more than happy to send you a roleplay example, and I'd be willing to rewrite and correct as you see fit. So, just, let me know hehe.